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I would like to be chief because, we need someone who can be a problem solver and easily connect with people. And I do both these things effectively. I would also like to take on the responsibility, and can do so successfully. I feel that I have much more growth and gains to make but am interested in the process and what it takes to become a chief. I would also appreciate the feedback and opportunities for growth, becoming a chief.

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I would like to be chief because we need someone who can solve problems and easily connect with people. I can do both of these things effectively. I am aware that being a chief requires a lot of responsiblity but believe that I can successfully take on any responsibilties that come with being a chief. I feel that the feedback and oppertunities that come from becoming a chief would give me oppertuntities to learn and grow as a person. I am not just intrested in the position of chief but also the process it will take to get there. I believe that I am fully capable of doing the work required to recieve this position.

Explanation:            

I hope this is what you are looking for. I tried my best to make it longer while also keeping all of your main points. I moved some things around and reworded sections for easier understanding.


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On p.857, Walter asks, "Ruth, what is it gets into people ought to be close?" When they try to talk about why they are having such problems, they reach no conclusion. What do you think the playwright wants us to understand as the cause of their problems

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Answer:

The playwright wants the reader to understand that the main cause among the problems was the lack of communication and understanding among family members.

Explanation:

The excerpt presented in the question above is an excerpt from the play "A raisin in the sun" which features a family who received a large amount of money, which, despite changing their lives, proved that many problems affected all members of the family. These problems often become much bigger than what they should be due to the internal fights in the family, caused by the lack of communication, understanding and trust between the members. This is highlighted in the excerpt presented in the question above, where Walter, one of the main characters, feels uncomfortable with how the emotional distance between family members has affected everyone's lives.

In April 2010, an oil rig exploded in the Gulf of Mexico. Millions of gallons of oil leaked into the Gulf, devastating
wildlife. Scientists tried to clean up the spill in a variety of ways. One approach involved the use of oil-eating
bacteria. However, scientists were divided on its effectiveness. Some maintained that the bacteria were "fairly
fast" in cleaning the spill. Officials reported that the Gulf would make a full recovery by 2012. Yet Samantha Joye,
a marine scientist, disagreed. She conducted a study of the sea floor. She found that the bacteria had cleaned
only 10 percent of the oil. She reported that the Gulf would take many years to recover.
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The reports were
А
ignored
B conflicting
С
humorous
D appreciated

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 The answer is B, conflicting.

Answer:

B conflicting

Explanation:

The reports were conflicting.

which one is the simple subject in these sentence ? A total of more of one hundred players compete in the series

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series is the answer

Hazel had a perfectly average intelligence, which meant she couldn't think about anything except in short bursts.
And George, while his intelligence was way above normal, had a little mental handicap radio in his ear. He was
required by law to wear it at all times. It was tuned to a government transmitter. Every twenty seconds or so, the
transmitter would send out some sharp noise to keep people like George from taking unfair advantage of their
brains.
How could this excerpt serve as a warning about the consequences of forced uniformity?
O by suggesting that forced uniformity specifically benefits individuals who are not smart
O by suggesting that forced uniformity encourages certain people to break the law
O by implying that forced uniformity interferes with individuals' intellectual development
by implying that forced uniformity hampers a society's ability to use new technologies
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Answer:

C or "by implying that forced uniformity interferes with individuals' intellectual development"

Explanation:

A)by suggesting that forced uniformity specifically benefits individuals who are not smart

C)by implying that forced uniformity interferes with individuals' intellectual development

These two answers make the most sense, but with the wording of the question, suggest a lean towards the second.

Considering it wants a warning of the consequences it seems to want something negative, which C offers. A actually provides support for uniformity, but also makes more sense in the context of what was just read, especially in regards to the last line.

I would suggest you take a deeper look at the previous questions to see whether your teacher really wants you to view the text in a good or bad light, which would help you identify the best answer; but for now I suggest C.

Are children the intended audience?

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Answer:

It depends on the genre...

Explanation:

It depends on the type of genre they are experienced in

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read this excerpt from this persuasive essay.

which sentence provides evidence that supports the writer's claim *must look at photo*

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Answer:

i think the first one is the claim

Answer:

even with this....12 percent.

Explanation:

this sentence provides quantitative evidence which is the result of a study.

what Scout means when she says, "Had her conduct been more friendly toward me, I would have felt sorry for her”?​

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If the person in question has been nicer to Scout upon meeting her she would have felt sorry for her

Explanation:

Maybe if she were more nicer to scoot

I need this as soon as possible please

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Answer:

promptly.

Explanation:

An adverb can be defined as a word that is used in English language to modify a verb, adjective, or another adverb. Some examples are slowly, quickly, brightly, sadly, promptly, etc.

Generally, adverbs are formed by adding the suffix "ly" to the end of a verb e.g prompt + ly = promptly.

Promptly simply means to be punctual or do something quickly and soon.

Hence, the adverb in the sentence "Reiko told me to arrive promptly at 8 p.m. in order to be on time for the dinner." is promptly.

Additionally, there are six (6) main types of adverbs and these includes;

I. Adverb of time.

II. Adverb of frequency.

III. Adverb of place.

IV. Adverb of manner.

V. Adverb of reason.

VI. Adverb of intensity.

Answer:

C

Explanation:

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In act lll,scene ii of Julius Caesar, who gave their reasons why ceasar was killed

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Answer:

Brutus and Antony gave their reasons for why Caesar was killed

That's just how it happened

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Why did leaders from nearly 200 nations convene in Paris in December 2015?
1: Leaders met to determine the best place in Africa to replant about 100 million hectares (386,000 square miles) of forest by 2030.
2: Leaders convened to discuss the pressing issue of climate change and how nations can work together to combat it.
3: Leaders convened to discuss how to maintain the current level of greenhouse gases emitted into the atmosphere.
4: Leaders met to pledge funds that would be used to convince more nations to take part in the Paris Agreement initiatives.

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Answer:

2. Leaders convened to discuss the pressing issue of climate change and how nations can work together to combat it.

Explanation:

Nearly 200 countries in the world, precisely, 196 countries convened in Paris in December 2015 to discuss the problem of climate change that affects everyone on the globe. This agreement falls within the framework of the United Nations Framework Convention on Climate Change. The agreement at this convention was to reduce the temperature emitted at a global level to an average of 2° Celsius or an equivalent of  3.6° Fahrenheit.

The ultimate goal however is to attain a limit of 1.5° Celsius or its equivalent of 2.7° Fahrenheit. When these goals are reached our climate will be restored and living things will have a better chance of survival.

Which of these terms is another term for clustering?

free writing

webbing

looping

spatial order

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Answer:

im pretty sure its webbing.

Explanation:

Clustering, Mind Map, Webbing is a strategy that helps students organize their ideas and stay focused on a subject. Further, it helps students develop their ideas, deepen understanding, build connections, and identify important points about a topic. - g oogle

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Why does the speaker mention seemingly minor price increases in the second stanza? (Harlem by Langston Hughes)

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Answer:

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Given (x - 1)^2= 50, select the values of x.
x = -49
x = 51
X=1+5v2
X=1-5v2
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Answer:

the answer to your question is x=49

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if you know any of these please help me

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Sorry I don’t know




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Describe the role that poetry plays in American society today. What purpose does poetry serve, and who benefits from it?

(Remember that poetry appears in many places besides textbooks or poetry collections, including song lyrics, advertising, and spoken-word performances.)​

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poetry is surprisingly popular in our day and age, many things pass off that you wouldn’t expect. rap is quite inspired by poetry and slam poetry! poetry is something we can all enjoy and helps you really stop and take in the beauty of something, it’s a breather and reminder of what’s around us.

Answer:

pepe pecas pica papas

Explanation:

Our restaurant is becoming……….…………..successful, so we will have to hire more staff. ( increase)

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Answer:

increasingly

Explanation:

Our restaurant is becoming……….…increasingly………..successful, so we will have to hire more staff.

Why we used increasingly?

This word is used because it is used to indicate that a situation or quality is becoming greater in intensity. And according to the statement, since the restaurant is becoming successful, so we used increasingly.

What is an adverb?

An adverb is a word that is used to change, modify or qualify several types of words including an adjective, a verb, a clause, another adverb, or any other type of word or phrase, with the exception of determiners and adjectives, that directly modify nouns.

Thus, he word increasingly is an adverb here because it is being used to describe how the success is changing.

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The idea that in Okonkwo's language, the word for "woman" is also used to describe a man
without power suggests?

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It suggests that men are superior to women and they (men) are the only ones with any power to control things in their society

We use information from which two sources in order to determine whether an author uses a word or phrase differently than we use it now?

A) a dictionary and a thesaurus
B) a usage dictionary and a dictionary
C) the reading itself and a thesaurus
D) the reading itself and a dictionary

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Answer:

I strongly believe that this questions answer is B

Explanation: When we talking about the past we must say that a lot of vocabulary are changed. Because thanks to time we forgot same vocabulary. We need to check a usage dictionary and a dictionary to get vocabulary which one used in the past. Some words means are same and some words look like same but they haven't same means for this we should check dictionary.

Answer:

D) the reading itself and a dictionary

Explanation:

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Answer:

The Grimms embellished stories with more details in their final editions.

Explanation:

In "How The Grimm Brothers Saved the Fairytale", author Jack Zipes narrates how the Grimm brothers 'developed' and enhanced their stories with time. The author provides the history of the development of the children's tales that would become historically significant not only in Germany but all through the literary world all over the globe.

In the given excerpt, the author shows how the Grimms changed their descriptive development in their stories. Like here, for example, the tale of Rapunzel in the First and seventh editions differ mostly in their description of the same scene or detail.

Thus, the correct answer is the second option.

What is the BEST description of Anne Frank’s point of view in The Diary of a Young Girl?

She is aware of the danger from the Nazis but is not bothered by it until her older sister is called up.

Her point of view is one of anger and resentment at having to go into hiding because of the Nazis.

Her point of view is one of sadness and depression because her entire life is changed by the Nazis.

She is naive about the danger from the Nazis, but then she must face reality when they go into hiding.

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Answer:

Her point of view is one of sadness and depression because her entire life is changed by the Nazis.

Explanation:

"Diary of a Young Girl" is the diary written by Anne Frank, a Jewish girl who was killed in Nazi concentration camps, but who, before that, spent three years in hiding with her family and other Jews.

She starts writing in her diary even before going into hiding, where she already shows great sadness at the devaluation and dangers Jews were living in in Nazi-dominated Europe. After going into hiding, this feeling of sadness and depression only increases, as she cannot live normally because of Nazism, they cannot be free or do anything they like. She is also very scared for everything that is happening and especially for not knowing if she will escape alive.

Answer:

She is aware of the danger from the Nazis but is not bothered by it until her older sister is called up.

Explanation:

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Witch of the following is not true about motion?

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Answer:

D

Explanation:

Answer:

B

Explanation:

A: true

B: False. Forces are what causes motion.

C: This is Newton's first law. It is true.

D: This is Newton's third law. It is true.

Which element of a text best helps the reader
determine the central dea?

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Answer:

The Key Details.

Read the excerpt from act 5, scene 1, of Julius Caesar.

OCTAVIUS. Come, Antony, away!
Defiance, traitors, hurl we in your teeth.
If you dare fight to-day, come to the field.
If not, when you have stomachs.

What is the tone of this passage?

regretful wishing he had been a better leader
discouraged knowing that they will lose to Brutus and Cassius
scornful suggesting Brutus and Cassius are traitors and cowards
sad when rembering the daily struggles the Roman citizens must endure

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Answer:

scornful suggesting Brutus and Cassius are traitors and cowards

Explanation:

The tone of the above passage is a scornful one for it mocks Brutus and Cassius and challenges them to a fight. In this passage, Octavius considers Brutus and Cassius as traitors because they put Caesar to death. He challenges them to a fight and also believes that they will not win the fight since they are cowards running away from the city.

Antony a close friend of Caesar hopes to avenge his death and organizes his army to attack the army of Brutus and Cassius who have fled from the city.

Answer:

scornful suggesting Brutus and Cassius are traitors and cowards

Explanation:

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Need passage to answer

The Crab That Played with the Sea

based on the details in the excerpt, what is its primary purpose?

Inform?
Describe?
Persuade?
Entertain?

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The primary purpose is to explain to children that the moon causes tides

Answer:

To Inform

Explanation:

Do you believe that our lives are dictated entirely by fate or fortune

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I think a little bit of both
Yes because it all depends on how u strat your adult life so if u start of bad then most likely there will be a lot of fate

Auntie is the lady to...... I gave the list.​

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Answer:

Aunty is the lady to whom whom I give the list.

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What is the appropriate personal pronoun for the bold words in the following sentence? Yes, Tina and Lil will enjoy it very much.​

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it is tell them to learn it themself
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