The assignment wants to analyze your editing skill, for that reason I can't edit your text, but I'll show you how to edit it.
Steps to edit the textRead the entire text aloud.Identify sentences that are unclear, or do not establish the desired statement.Identify words spelled incorrectly.Identify inconsistencies.Note the fluidity of the text.A fluid text allows for efficient reading with correct pauses. These pauses are expressed by the punctuation that must be added to the text coherently.
It is important to observe the textual structure, which is the way information is presented in the text. A text must have an organized structure with coherent information.
Active and passive voices are related to the positioning of the verb in the sentence. The active voice occurs when the subject is performing the action of the verb. The passive voice occurs when the subject is undergoing the action of the verb.
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what or who is someone who represents the party views of a state at a national convention
Answer: me
Explanation:
Select the correct answer.
What conclusion about Stone can you draw based on these two excerpts?
O A.
She is pleased with the strides women have made over 50 years.
OB.
She is proud of what teachers, seamstresses, and housekeepers have achieved.
OC.
She is glad that women have finally achieved the right to vote.
D.
She still wants women to feel disappointed by their limitations.
The conclusion about Stone can you draw based on these two excerpts is She is pleased with the strides women have made over 50 years. Hence option A is correct.
What is stone ?Any naturally occurring solid mass or combination of minerals or mineraloid materials is referred to as rock (or stone) in geology. It is divided into groups based on the minerals it contains, its chemical make-up, and how it is produced. Except for the liquid outer core and pockets of magma in the asthenosphere, the Earth's crust and the majority of its interior are made of rocks. Petrology and mineralogy are only two of the many geology subdisciplines that are involved in the study of rocks. It could just include rocks found on Earth, or it might also cover planetary geology, which examines materials from other celestial bodies.
Hence option A is correct.
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DIRECTIONS: You are going to be deserted on an island for a very time. You must come up with a list of 15 items you will bring with you in order to survive. NOTE: The items must be in order of the priority (the most important item to the least important).
Answer:
A large amount of water, a large amount of food, a way to protect yourself from any wildlife and to kill and cook it, away to call for help, a way to make a fire, a way to make shelter. That’s 6 if I think of more I’ll add them.
Explanation:
Which lines show that Juliet is obedient? Check all that apply.
“How now! Who calls?”
“Your mother.”
“What is your will?”
“Speak briefly, can you like of Paris’ love?”
“I’ll look to like, if looking liking move”
"No more deep will I endart mine eye / Than your consent gives strength to make it fly."
Answer:
C : "What is your will?"
E: "I'll look to like, if looking liking move"
F: "No more deep will I endart mine eye / Than your consent gives strength to make it fly."
Answer:
C. “What is your will?”
E. “I’ll look to like, if looking liking move”
F. "No more deep will I endart mine eye / Than your consent gives strength to make it fly."
Explanation:
Which of these is an example of a good clarifying question? What did you think of the way the story ended? What made you think that loyalty to friends was a theme in the story? What was the last thing the main character said? What did you just say, in plain English?
Answer:
What did you just say, in plain English?
Explanation:
A clarifying question is a question that is asked in other to gain clarity or in other to become more aware of a topic of discussion. What did you just say in plain English is a clarifying question. These kind of questions are simple questions of facts and they are good in providing useful feedbacks. We have the open clarifying questions and then the close clarifying question
Write the introductory paragraph of a report on an accident involving a cyclist that occurred on your street.
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Answer:
On october 19, 2020 a cyclist was hit by a car,he had to be in the hospital for about a year. Now that he is out he is going to sue to get money for his hospital damages.
Explanation:
Read the excerpt from “Sea Fever” by John Masefield.
To the gull’s way and the whale’s way where the wind’s like a whetted knife;
Which sound device is most notable in the excerpt?
alliteration
assonance
onomatopoeia
rhyme
Answer:
A. Alliteration, not sure if its correct:/
Explanation:
Read the section "Mullen's Career Saved By Game Appearance." Select the detail from the article that suggests that Pro Skater video games helped Rodney Mullen's career. Mullen, considered an important skater in history, was a character in Tony Hawk's Pro Skater 2. Mullen, considered an important skater in history, was a character in Tony Hawk's Pro Skater 2. "I called him up and was like, 'Hey man, I'm thinking of giving up. I don't know if this is a sign. I've busted my ankle,'" Mullen said. "I called him up and was like, 'Hey man, I'm thinking of giving up. I don't know if this is a sign. I've, , busted my ankle,'" Mullen said. "'You hurt your ankle? Big deal. That doesn't mean anything. Oh, and by the way, do you wanna be in my game?'" "'You hurt your ankle? Big deal. That doesn't mean anything. Oh, and by the way, do you wanna be in, , my game?'" When Mullen went on tour the next summer, a month after the game came out, there were more people
Answer:
A. Mullen, considered an important skater in history, was a character in Tony Hawk's Pro Skater 2.
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Answer:
"a good friend is like a 4-leaf clover, hard to find and lucky to have."
Explanation:
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What happened after slavery?
Put it in your own words please.
Answer:
they were freed and they could run free and where they didnt have to be tolded what to do anymore
Explanation:
change this into your own words. someone pls help plsss
Answer:
I also enjoyed how the children were treated, they were treated nicely and respectfully as full members in this video. [I also feel as if it is important for everyone to remember that children do not always understand their emotions that they are showing to others. People must remember that children don't understand how to make their feeling understandable
1.You_______always look both ways before crossing the street.
2.Mary______attend the fundraiser later. She has alredy scheduled it in her planner.
3.The bus_______be late as the as the traffic situation in the city is very unpredictable.
4.Mara got the highest score on today's science's exam.She______study a lot.
5.I_____help my mother clean the house but I feel very tired
Answer:
Explanation:
1. Should
2. Will
3. May
4. Must
5. Did
Which of the following would not be considered an on-the-page question?
A. When did Shawn go over to his best friend's house?
B. Where did Shawn's best friend live?
C. What was Shawn's best friend's name?
D. What would I look for in a best friend?
SUBMIT
Answer:
D
Explanation:
because its an opinion, and who's "I"?
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Where can you find information about how to capitalize words within a title?
a.) the encyclopedia
b.) editorial guidelines
c.) a style guide
d.) a publisher's specifications
Answer:
B. Editorial guidelines
Explanation:
I just took a test on it
Correct this run-on sentence. Would mean a lot. You can make it two sentences or use a comma and a coordinating conjunction.
The farm is in Pennsylvania it is near the city of Gettysburg.
Answer:
The farm is in Pennsylvania, it's near the city of Gettysburg.
*4. IDENTIFYING CAUSE
AND EFFECT
Fill in the flowchart to show
how the repeal of the Stamp
Act led to the passage of the
Coercive Acts.
Parliament passes the
Declaratory Act, stating that
it can tax the colonies and
make all decisions for them.
Please Help ASAP. I dont understand these!
Answer:
1) D, 2) C, 3) A
Explanation:
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Why do you think these particular photographs were chosen for the photo essay?
Answer:
so they can inspire you
Explanation:
Read the passage from "Initiation."
The door behind her opened and a ray of light sliced
across the soft gloom of the basement room.
"Hey Millicent, come on out now. This is it." There were
some of the girls outside.
"I'm coming," she said, getting up and moving out of the
soft darkness into the glare of light, thinking: This is it, all
right. The worst part, the hardest part, the part of initiation
that I figured out myself.
The passage provides evidence that Millicent has overcome what kind of conflict?
Character vs Character
Character vs Nature
Character vs Self
Character vs Society
Answer:
character vs. self
Explanation:
edge 2020 :)
what are 5 or more good and bad things about home quarintine
Answer:
Time with your family
more time to do things you never have the time to
getting to lay down and watch tv
having school at home
bad things
tiring
exhausting
unhealthy
Boring
Explanation:
Answer:
Explanation:
BAD
1. I dont like being with family 24/7
2. I dont like distance learning
3. I cant go anywhere
4. I can see friends
GOOD
5. i can eat
Which of these sentences contains a transition word or phrase?
A-When we got home, we opened our gifts.
B-Eventually, we found our way home from the park.
C-We had a good time at the birthday party before Thanksgiving.
D-We were sure that we would be the last ones to leave.
Answer:
B.Eventually ,we found our way home from the park
Describe Rebecca Nurse. What role does she seem to play in the conversation at Parris'
home?
Answer:
LOOK DOWN
Explanation:
SHE IS PLAYING THE ROLE OF THE INNOCENT SWEET NURSE WHO ACTUALLY TURNS OUT EVIL AFTER POISINING JAMES D'PARLE
Okay quick questions!
Who’s read “the giver” before?
Answer:
I have.
Explanation:
It's really good
Answer:
if you are asking who write it then it's Lois Lowry
im writting a sonnet and I need help to figure out the difference between stressed and unstressed syllables because i dont really get it.
Answer:
A stressed syllable is the part of a word that you say with greater emphasis than the other syllables. Alternatively, an unstressed syllable is a part of a word that you say with less emphasis than the stressed syllable(s). However, you don't emphasize or deemphasize syllables using volume; instead, you use pitch.
Explanation:
Journeys readers notebook page 39 5th grade help
Answer:
1. Those who have mastered double Dutch may want to try qualifying for a competition.
2. In any sport, it is important to wear the right gear for protection.
3. The cycle of day and night on Earth is caused by the planet's rotation.
4. She completed a short application to attend the volleyball camp.
5, It is difficult to do long division without paper and a pencil
6. Completing a large job requires teamwork and organization.
7. The school musical is a student production that takes several weeks to plan.
8. When you encounter a problem, it is fine to ask for help to find a solution.
9. When a person or group fights a new idea, they are called the opposition.
10. When her dog was lost, she undertook a rescue operation to find it.
Which two questions are good questions to ask in an informational interview?
Answer:
What are your main responsibilities as a...?
What is a typical day (or week) like for you?
What do you like most about your work?
What do you like least about your work?
What kinds of problems do you deal with?
What kinds of decisions do you make?
How does your position fit within the organization/career field/industry?
How does your job affect your general lifestyle?
What current issues and trends in the field should I know about/be aware of?
What are some common career paths in this field?
What kinds of accomplishments tend to be valued and rewarded in this field?
What related fields do you think I should consider looking into?
How did you become interested in this field?
How did you begin your career?
How do most people get into this field? What are common entry-level jobs?
What steps would you recommend I take to prepare to enter this field?
How relevant to your work is your undergraduate major?
What kind of education, training, or background does your job require?
What skills, abilities, and personal attributes are essential to success in your job/this field?
What is the profile of the person most recently hired at my level?
What are the most effective strategies for seeking a position in this field?
Can you recommend trade journals, magazines or professional associations which would be helpful for my professional development?
If you could do it all over again, would you choose the same path for yourself? If not, what would you change?
I’ve read that the entry-level salary range for this field is usually in the range of ______? Does this fit with what you’ve seen? (Don’t ask about the person’s actual salary.)
What advice would you give someone who is considering this type of job (or field)?
Answer:
What does an average day look like for an employee/student in my field of work/study?
What resources are offered, and how do they work?
Explanation:
What is your favorite story from childhood or from a recent time
The colored fish and movie, Princess and the frog.
Can someone help me i promise i will give you a brainlist if i get it right..
Answer:
A
Explanation: Answer A is decribed as someone being in Awe of the firefighters, this shows that they admire them and cannot take their eyes off of them.
whats the preposition in the sentence. Throughout his audition, Manny Delgado made sure to keep smiling.
Answer:
The preposition is Throughout.
What's the adverb of this sentence? Christie can sometimes be annoying